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Alone in the unknown land

I am alone,in this unknown land
The way back as a losers game,I played
Wanna live it bravely but at times I fail....
Me who cries for the gone past,me myself call a pessimist

Past which teach me a lot
Life a teacher,teach me happily the sorrows...
Me jealous of those happy ones
Thinks its a curse alone for me or may the fate...

Still my goals are firm
I'm not ready to leave it for the past
But for the future
I am ready to fight for my life

Me not a selfish ! Still want something,not for me 
But to help the world,The ones who are alone..........

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  1. Date: 6/10/2011 12:53:00 AM

    Nice thought madam.....:)................nicely fought against lonliness........beautiful :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 8:28:00 AM

    My contest results are posted, Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 8:39:00 AM

    Nivitha, thanks for supporting my contest with this poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 5:51:00 PM

    Nivitha, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 7:41:00 AM

    Life is indeed a great teacher, Nivitha. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 7:34:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning poem and placement in Moses contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 10:58:00 AM

    i love this. i really do. amazing write. xo rain

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 11:00:00 AM

    this is a good poem and it says alot; life is hard and it takes alot to get through life and come out the same person you want to be. keep your goals firm and fight for your life! =)Jo

  1. Date: 1/22/2010 11:03:00 AM

    I want to most graciously thank you for your support of my contest. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 10:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Nivotha. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 12:40:00 AM

    Beautiful piece! Great job on this entry- ed

  1. Date: 8/13/2009 10:54:00 AM

    the most freedom that everybody can do in this world is to do good. i am touch..dont leave people alone...

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 12:30:00 PM

    Strangers see everything as beautiful, but also as lonely. One day you will have many friends, and your dreams will bear sweet fruit

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 8:42:00 AM

    nice poem i really enjoyed it and thank you for the comment on my poem you and i

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 1:27:00 AM

    Nicely constructed and expressed... an ode to the selfless and the meek. Well done Nivitha! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 12:58:00 AM

    Welcome to the Soupland Nivitha. There is a wide room wating for you Thank you for your honest comment on my The Farmer. Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 12:33:00 AM

    Welcome to the soup, eloquently phrased, and thank you for the comment on my works in progress, lol. You have talent, keep us begging for more, hun....Aleera

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 10:46:00 AM

    hey Nivitha, welcome to the PS! thank you and i love this write too... you have got a unique style... and your message is really cool! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 10:31:00 AM

    Hi Nivitha... there is something descriptively quirky in your style.... the flow in this poem is made more so by this individual style... really liked the brave affirmation ! Thank you for your comment on Death and Life