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Crashing Waves

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Crashing Waves

Angry, fierce water,
Nature’s surge, a tossing tide;
Crashing upon rocks.

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  1. Date: 2/18/2010 11:22:00 AM
    this is a great haiku! it has a kind of ......wild feel to it that i love reminds me of that movie where the surface of the water catches fire. and it was a very beautiful piece as well. a double ended spear! great write! =)Jo

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 3:14:00 AM
    Daniel, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 1:37:00 PM
    Amazing write, congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 4:57:00 PM
    Daniel, just wanted to drop in and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on making it through the first round of the poetry competition! Luck and love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Daniel. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 11:01:00 PM
    Daniel congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 1:01:00 PM
    Congrats Daniel on your haiku being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 9:57:00 AM
    Love this one because it could be anything that I wanted it to be or just angry waves. Sara

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 4:24:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 12:59:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery and personification. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 8:25:00 AM
    Daniel,.. I clearly see and feel this Haiku !!! congrats on its feature this week !! james

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 4:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured>>James

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 1:45:00 PM
    Love how this one makes me seemed to be right their when the tides hit the rock! Nice work!

  1. Date: 4/14/2009 7:11:00 PM
    The reader can see and feel the intensity in your "Angry, fierce water." The sea is a tremendous source of inspiration for poets. You have painted your image very well in this excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 8:52:00 PM
    Nice work, loved the imagery

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 6:05:00 PM
    Good job Daniel you rock at writing haiku's.............Danielle

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:51:00 AM
    the image is so fierce! lovely haiku ~ Arany

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:49:00 AM
    "Angry, fierce water" the whole thing is nice, great job...Raul

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:45:00 AM
    This is a great one,Daniel. Continue sharing. Ruben.