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                        shower curtain’s hiss
                        wakes me up, wakes us up
                        king size tent waits






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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:43:00 PM

    LOL! Congratulations on your Senryu being featured this week on Soup, Ruben! Annalise

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:47:00 PM

    Ruben, hope your days are filled with joy... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on your senryu being featured this week! It is fokken groot! Is the "hiss" to do with a spitting cobra?

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 3:38:00 PM

    LOL ..hot hot hot Light & Love [gotta watch those center poles!]

  1. Date: 4/12/2010 3:13:00 PM

    A romantic one Ruben and thankxxx for participating in my Poetry Book contest.. hope u read my blog about the Winners and see how the judging was done... my new contest is now posted.. "Shining Star" and hope u have some inspiration for it to enter...luv.. and friendship.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/12/2010 9:26:00 AM

    things that make you go HMmmmmmm?

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 12:37:00 PM

    i wonder who is the dove...Gee l,, i dont know..it could be many.. wwhoever she is ,,she is far away..not here.where you are..and you can stay there forever,and ever a\men

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 3:54:00 AM

    Your dove,what a beautiful name to call ones love,a dove who inspires you constantly,i hope this dove of yours know how much you love her,lovely hiss,Celina

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 1:03:00 PM

    Outstandingly beautiful-a gem--I LOVE "THE HISS",Its my fav. of yours,charma:-)

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 12:58:00 PM

    THANKS FOR THE GOOD MALTESE WORDS GENIUS-HAVE TO GO --BYE TNKS FOR THE EFFORT-;-)

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 6:31:00 AM

    Mail call :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2009 10:55:00 AM

    Blushes! I love this!

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 2:20:00 PM

    i missed this one of yours,i love THE HISS

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 1:32:00 PM

    Ruben! My goodness, what a hot and steamy little write! Sorry I've been away, my daughter's wedding was just yesterday, so trying to catch up! Warmest wishes. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 8:21:00 PM

    Hissing and sizzling with passion at dawn, Ruben! As Randy Jackson says on "American Idol," "Another molten hot lava bomb from you, Dawg." Wish I could master the erotic art form you display here! (I'd write a poem about my king-size water bed, but I don't think my stuffed bear would appreciate the invasion of privacy.)

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 9:35:00 PM

    Great images here, what a thought to wake up to, and the king size tent...~LOL- what happened to the Bed???Nice Senryu, GB Always, Tyesha

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:17:00 AM

    Lol, that is funny, you are crazy, great senryu, this one is going in my fav's...Raul

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 9:25:00 AM

    wow! what a wake up thought!?! really wonderful haiku! Ruben, have a great day! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 7:33:00 AM

    What a description! Perfect Ruben, nice write.

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 6:00:00 AM

    This is so well done..every line was wonderful...good writing.