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Sour Patch Kids

First they’re sour then they’re sweet Watermelon taste They come in different colors A chewy mouthful I can eat them all By myself Mmm _______________________ Inspired by Laura Mckenzie's -Sweet Treat Contest-

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  1. Date: 5/17/2009 1:34:00 PM

    This is a wonderful treat. I like the flow and the tastiness of the words. I would eat them all by myself also. LOL!!! Great treat! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 2:52:00 PM

    I love this. I soooooooooo agree with your choice.

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:34:00 AM

    Nice sweet treat, definately a good one, best of luck in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 12:01:00 AM

    I like eating sour patch kids too, nice topic and good luck. DN