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A Vacation

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A Vacation

Clouds in a blue sky,
Crystal clear, peaceful waters;
Palm trees casting shade.

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  1. Date: 5/6/2009 4:59:00 PM
    What a beautiful state of feeling -Alley

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 12:58:00 PM
    Absolutely perfect the way the haiku reflects the title. Very well done, Daniel!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 4:58:00 PM
    Beautiful description of a tropical paradise, Daniel. I'm ready to take a vacation after reading this! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 5:14:00 PM
    Nice work on you first hot poem, congrats and keep writing.

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 8:32:00 PM
    A vacation is what I need and I would visit this place anytime

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 8:27:00 PM
    A nice place you painted with words, sounds like a great place to be. Tyler

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:47:00 AM
    Beautiful image in this one! I like it. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 9:57:00 AM
    'crystal clear' ... haiku too! ncie one, Daniel! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 8:58:00 PM
    move over, I'm coming. Nice! BG

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 7:04:00 PM
    Oh gosh that is simply too inviting. Sigh. Well done. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 5:00:00 PM
    Blissful haiku. I believe that forth graders need to memorize simple haiku. Please publish every haiku you compose as post cards. All the best.

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 4:46:00 PM
    i need this vacation very soon,love it-charma

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 4:33:00 PM
    Beautiful write little bro, I really enjoyed this one. Love your sis.

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 4:29:00 PM
    Sounds lovely....I want to be there! ~

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 4:05:00 PM
    Nice place you painted, I would love to be there, right under those palm trees writing poetry...Raul

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 3:15:00 PM
    Thats were I want to be now but where's the pina colada? Great one Daniel. Leon