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Horses of Mist

A cumulous herd,
Galloping the atmosphere;
Pasture in the sky.

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    James Fraser
    Date: 5/24/2009 11:13:00 AM
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    Another cracking piece,James
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    Brittany Paradis
    Date: 4/8/2009 10:45:00 AM
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    I got some beautiful imagery from just reading those three lines....it's easy when you're an young artist and poet....not yet professional and have a great imagination. *smile*
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    Chris Goombi
    Date: 4/3/2009 8:39:00 PM
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    Nice herd, clouds make cool shapes.

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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 4/2/2009 4:11:00 PM
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    Dear Raul, I can Picture the photographs this Haiku came from Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 4/2/2009 12:02:00 AM
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    Thank you for your kind words on my blog today Raul.Rgds Brian
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    Danielle Moreno
    Date: 4/1/2009 6:06:00 PM
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    Nice clouds shapes you talk about, you rock at writing haikus..........Danielle
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 4/1/2009 10:27:00 AM
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    A-M-A-Z-I-N-G . . .Ruben
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    Abe Lopez
    Date: 3/31/2009 5:14:00 PM
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    sonderful imagery.... I saw this same herd in yesterdays thunderstorm. great write!
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    Elizabeth Neal
    Date: 3/31/2009 1:15:00 PM
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    A cumulous heard, genius. You bring a enormous talent to the soup.
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    Laurie Ginn
    Date: 3/31/2009 1:03:00 PM
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    My son and I were playing clouds yesterday, one game you never grow to old for...nice write Raul.
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    Tyler Martin
    Date: 3/31/2009 12:54:00 PM
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    Great title and haiku, you bring write description in your work. Tyler
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    Robin L. Gass
    Date: 3/31/2009 9:50:00 AM
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    Stunning imagery, Raul! I love the pictures painted in the sky! Perfect Haiku! Love Robin
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    John Rhinem
    Date: 3/30/2009 9:17:00 PM
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    Smile~Nice metaphor Raul~For whom knows what chariots are riding behind those horses atop those clouds!? Smile~Well, that would be my thought and take from this wonderful write my dear Brother!:)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Have A Very Blessed & Wonderful Night~Bye!:)
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    Lena Townsend
    Date: 3/30/2009 8:41:00 PM
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    Beautiful imagery. So few words and still so much said. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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    Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 3/30/2009 6:21:00 PM
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    Magical Haiku you wrote here!! Laura :)
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 3/30/2009 4:24:00 PM
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    Enchanting image of cloud formations, Raul! Made me think of the song "Ghost Riders in the Sky."
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 3/30/2009 4:19:00 PM
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    This is such a lovely haiku..you've captured the form. BG
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    Daniel Neal
    Date: 3/30/2009 3:27:00 PM
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    Great imagination Raul, you display beautiful haiku's. DN


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