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Horses of Mist

A cumulous herd,
Galloping the atmosphere;
Pasture in the sky.

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  1. Date: 5/24/2009 11:13:00 AM
    Another cracking piece,James

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 10:45:00 AM
    I got some beautiful imagery from just reading those three lines....it's easy when you're an young artist and poet....not yet professional and have a great imagination. *smile*

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 8:39:00 PM
    Nice herd, clouds make cool shapes.

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 4:11:00 PM
    Dear Raul, I can Picture the photographs this Haiku came from Superb Write ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 12:02:00 AM
    Thank you for your kind words on my blog today Raul.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 6:06:00 PM
    Nice clouds shapes you talk about, you rock at writing haikus..........Danielle

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 10:27:00 AM
    A-M-A-Z-I-N-G . . .Ruben

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 5:14:00 PM
    sonderful imagery.... I saw this same herd in yesterdays thunderstorm. great write!

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 1:15:00 PM
    A cumulous heard, genius. You bring a enormous talent to the soup.

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 1:03:00 PM
    My son and I were playing clouds yesterday, one game you never grow to old for...nice write Raul.

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 12:54:00 PM
    Great title and haiku, you bring write description in your work. Tyler

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 9:50:00 AM
    Stunning imagery, Raul! I love the pictures painted in the sky! Perfect Haiku! Love Robin

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 9:17:00 PM
    Smile~Nice metaphor Raul~For whom knows what chariots are riding behind those horses atop those clouds!? Smile~Well, that would be my thought and take from this wonderful write my dear Brother!:)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Have A Very Blessed & Wonderful Night~Bye!:)

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 8:41:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery. So few words and still so much said. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 6:21:00 PM
    Magical Haiku you wrote here!! Laura :)

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 4:24:00 PM
    Enchanting image of cloud formations, Raul! Made me think of the song "Ghost Riders in the Sky."

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 4:19:00 PM
    This is such a lovely haiku..you've captured the form. BG

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 3:27:00 PM
    Great imagination Raul, you display beautiful haiku's. DN