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Falling In Love





    f
       a
           l
              l
                 i
                    n
                        g..........    
                           
                                  in love 

                             is easy staying
                                  there is the
                                    challenge

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  1. Date: 12/19/2011 4:59:00 PM

    it take two baby.

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 11:05:00 PM

    Very creative format and very honest! I enjoyed your writing as usual. ~Des Juan

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 7:11:00 AM

    Original and beautiful display of creativity. Great write.

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 10:34:00 PM

    Very creative format

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 11:36:00 AM

    A challenge, perhaps...but also an agony. Very wise. Love, Sara:)

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 6:05:00 AM

    Your words are presented as pearls of wisdom my friend, great tone, imagery and flow as wriiten in superb shape form. Thank you D-Nyce for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 6:26:00 AM

    D-nyce , great visual and great observation ...

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 11:40:00 PM

    Nice viaual variation D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 5:23:00 PM

    Wow. This is so cleverly written and so true! Excellent! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 2:11:00 PM

    Hi Deneen Awe, I just love this for isn't it the truth for so many these days. If one is lucky enough to find love they better hold on to it tooth and nail.....Perfect hun just perfect! Thanks for your most welcome comments on my latest lyric it meant a lot to me. Hope you're doing well, I'm sending good thoughts your way. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 1:18:00 PM

    Yes my friend...the work to keep it going is the trick....love the flow and the form of the piece...