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We met in a spring

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We met in a spring

We met in a spring when she came in a wind
Soothing like a song is how her eyes tend
With our hands tied, we kept reading our mind
Being together & loving each other was the trend

Between the hearts we walked the lane of wedding
Dawn was never coming, Dusk went never ending
Every second made a moment, days were like occasions
I felt sunset only when, she got upset between lines

We wrote the meaning for loving
Sweet like a honey was our living
Uncommon was nothing 
Until egos came clashing

Egos stood like a mound; else all came like his dude
Bits and parts of heart were poured with hatred
Today munching of the spring, ego go dissolved
“Now, who will bring the spring?” I plead to the lord

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  1. Date: 10/2/2009 12:07:00 PM

    Chandru, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 2:02:00 PM

    Just dropping by to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 10:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2009 8:10:00 AM

    This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Classiq! Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 5:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 11:46:00 AM

    I like your poem. There is no question why it was featured. The love described here is so beautiful and the loss of it is definitely felt.

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 12:31:00 PM

    Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 9:55:00 AM

    Kudos on your featured poem, Classiq! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 9:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 4:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on being. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 3:17:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Classiq. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 1:58:00 AM

    congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 8/23/2009 5:04:00 PM

    Interesting view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 3:36:00 AM

    So many lines in this write I read twice. Love your descriptions. Really nice work Classiq.