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The Other Side Of My Heart

The other side of my heart 
Is like a crystal filled with hate 
And unwanted desires 
A desire to do what's wrong 
When everyone knows 
I should do right 
Hating the fact I'm alone 
And no place to call home 
Caught inbetween a lie

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  1. Date: 7/16/2009 7:53:00 PM

    we all have 2 sides on our harts bun not all of us know how to use the wisely nice write very truthful!!!

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 11:51:00 AM

    We all have another side and you did a great job describing yours. Keep writing and painting the canvas with your paint of words...Raul

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 2:52:00 PM

    Dear Anna: Written right from your heart, and it shows. Good way of expressing your emotions. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 8:39:00 PM

    the second line is especially nice. keep up the good work!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 5:10:00 PM

    expressions common to all, well done Anna! keep writing!! Best Always, Jim