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Clung Tenaciously

God’s mountains with its mighty peaks,
could be seen well in the distance,
separated by rivers and creeks,
and one featured plumes of angry smoke,
shooting in upward streaks,
everything in its path will choke,
it rose seemingly to the top of the sky,
imaginations fly,
dust leaving organic signatures,
as God’s blue print covers and surrounds,
and clumps of debris,
clung tenaciously to the ground,
for all Mankind to see.

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  1. Date: 3/26/2009 9:46:00 AM

    A very powerful image, Frank!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 12:10:00 PM

    I feel a warning, nice, Frank!

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 6:35:00 PM

    Heys sunshine you do 'em better than most. Nice work yet again.

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 4:33:00 PM

    Very well done..This reminds me Mt St Helens in Oregon..we lived with God's blue print for months..BG

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 4:18:00 PM

    Are you watching those scary nature flicks? You are really good at this type of poem. :) Krissy :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 3:17:00 PM

    God's mountains with its mighty peaks.rivers and creeks,angry smoke,imaginations fly,and then God again,wow i love it

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 3:10:00 PM

    The title it totally awesome and so is this wonderful poem! :) Love C

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 2:50:00 PM

    Dude you are doing the damn thing with this poem.. I am waiting for the death but all I got was pure beauty..love the title...love the images..Frankie boy, awesome work.