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Thoughts a Flow

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Thoughts a Flow

hoping for rain
to wash away

the pain that feeds
upon my soul

shattering this frail mind
longing for that sweet release

of love to erase
dreams of realities past

hand in hand
blue eyes look into mine

tears fall on his chest
arms holding me

tenderness abounds
as hearts meet

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  1. Date: 4/3/2009 3:53:00 PM

    sweet and cute. jhl

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 2:49:00 PM

    LaBella, what a beautiful closing stanza that is packed full of hopeful emotion. I commend you for a job well done as I now want to welcome you here and Thank You for sharing your gifted talent with us all. The title is awesome LaBella... MPK

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 1:16:00 PM

    What a darling lyric with an easy flow, all due to your genius. Thanks and love

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 6:54:00 AM

    Such a tender and beautiful love poem. Nice work. Love, shar

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 12:27:00 AM

    First let me say thank you for your kind comments on my writing. As for this write it is so touching and loving. It brings to mind some beautiful memories for me. You express passion and love so well. Nice write. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 5:20:00 PM

    This is so lovely. You bring such sweet images to mind with those last lines. Very awesome. :) Love Christie

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 5:02:00 PM

    The compassion offered by your love is something to treasure!

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 4:58:00 PM

    The emotion comes through your words on this one. Welcome back to Poetry Soup! The site has become quite a supportive place to share writing. I hope you enjoy your time back with us. Thank you for your kind thoughts on my poem. Karen