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Tickle Me ~haiku

Happy silly boy
Dusty straw hair flying free
Mommy... tickle me


 

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  1. Date: 3/27/2009 9:49:00 AM

    Wonderful haiku, My daughter loves it when I tickle her and she tickles me also, we have so much fun together..Very sweet~ Great Job, GB, Always Tyesha

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 11:18:00 AM

    Charming and exceedingly cute! Lovely word choices and a happy-go-lucky atmosphere... Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 6:13:00 AM

    Aww, so precious. My kids are both grown but I am expecting first grandchild in the fall - can't wait! Wonderful haiku! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 4:17:00 PM

    this so fun to read...filled so much joy and brings a smile to every face who reads it.....thnx for all ur comments n by da way I am a young spirit of just 14 years...lol...smiles and love from Maryam*

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 1:42:00 PM

    Such happy, sweet images ....this makes me smille! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 1:24:00 PM

    Thanks for making me smile with this one. Brings back memories of when our girls were young. Cute poem. Karen

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 1:22:00 PM

    fresh, free, full of joy! love this haiku, Jane, and thanks for comments on wish boat, spot-on and helpful, Best Always, Jim

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 11:05:00 AM

    really cute and sweet... this haiku really fresh and loving!! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 11:03:00 AM

    Such joy in this haiku, made me smile...Thanks

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 10:39:00 AM

    pure joy. john

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 10:19:00 AM

    [smile] this is short yet powerful. Enjoyed reading it and have a blessed day.

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 9:56:00 AM

    Thank you for bringing a smile to my face with this cute haiku. A lovely image here, Jane.

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 9:48:00 AM

    This is a sweet write, so happy and bright. Nicely done. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 9:43:00 AM

    I love this piece..love the mood of this write..such happpiness in the piece..nice work.