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AFTER DARK

in your presence 
where the force of attraction onslaughts
like dewdrops when they fall on roses,
i long to be.

in your eyes
where love beckons 
like a summer night,
i want to behold.

in your arms
where desire besieges 
like a maiden moon,
i can hide.

But deep down inside of you
where passion and ecstacy
are heating up in smoke,
.....i want to burn
...................burn
...................burn

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  1. Date: 3/28/2009 2:24:00 PM

    great write. . . .lots of passion!

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 8:27:00 AM

    Much passion in this great poem!

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 7:38:00 AM

    What an intelligent, and wonderful poem, indeed you are a poet. Love always, my friend.

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 5:39:00 AM

    i like the descriptive comparisons!! creates a scene so well! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 5:38:00 PM

    you write so romantically wonderful,glad to hear a new poem from you again,charma