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Water Sprite

Goddess of the blue…..
    you can see her
on a silver drenched 
      moonlit night
Stretched across the sand
   gazing the distance
and waiting on him....

      She is a nymph 
a wanton maiden of the sea
as it crashes her restless soul
and makes her desperate 
to lay as only God intended
        upon the shore
and feel the salt sting her face

her dark orbs are haunted
her warm tanned body is damp
she is like verdant green 
and smoking sapphire

she whispers a silent beckon 
to the blue….
              the endless eternal
that reckless aquamarine that tempts
that provocatively motions her
to tumble back into this deep abyss
and sail the ship of demise’s dark eyes
that many an ocean dweller has fallen to

A goddess of foam
arising from the water
to birth and to knowing
          Erotic  

in her eyes lay the universe
        and in her hands
          lay the hearts
     She has loved and lost
and some she may have broken

her wild hair is tousled 
     a little unkempt 
while her body is nubile 
whispering of temptation
  

how she loves the play
the freedom and the wind
the ponder on universal things 
and that man that taunts her soul


yes, she is eternal searching
naked in the full moon light
     for her souls companion
        and when he comes
       she will dance for him
          arms raised high
      fixed on his Adonis body
     and his mysterious eyes
that capture her in infinite bondage
 

Goddess of the blue
       you can see her
             upon the sand 
                 on a moonlit night
                          waiting on him…..

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  1. Date: 3/23/2009 5:31:00 PM

    Spellbinding..! Just awesome Christie... and before I start blathering off into the realms of marvelous, wonderful....... I'll stop .............. :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2009 12:10:00 PM

    Outstanding. I think that everyone, whether he or she admits it or not, writes some that are clearly a cut above the others. That is how we differentiate quality. That is how we know the best from the rest. This is one of those. I envy you this piece. Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 7:17:00 PM

    ....but, "You" are also such "Beautiful Soul," within soo many different ways!!!!?:):)~An d I sincerely count myself as humbly honored and fortunat e, to know "You" as the wonderful lady that "You" are; and to read "Your" talented and astounding words!!!!:):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Brianna, Forever, John!!!!"~"Sweet Dreams Beautiful Lady!!!!":):) Smile....

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 7:09:00 PM

    ...."In her eyes lay the universe; and in her hands lay the hearts.... "~Smile~Yes, they surely and truly do!!!!:):)~ This is a very creative, profoundly deep, and well written write "Beautiful Lady!!!!:):)~Filled with such vivid and wonderful colors and images!!!!:):)~Smile, "You" have become soo astonishing within "Your" expressive and excellent writings "Perfect Christie Moses!!!!":):)....cont....

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 7:06:00 PM

    Wow, so mystical and enchanting.....beautiful. Yes, through your images and vibrations, I can see her.:) Love, Sara

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 6:58:00 PM

    ....more than once since "Your Gifted Beauty" posted it!!!!:):)~But I just missed it friday morning!? And then the weekend got extremely hectic; so I really didn't have the time to properly comment upon it as I always wish too with "Your Writes!!!!":):)~Smile? Especially since I found a bit of time I thought to post one of those rush and brushes~Smile ~which brushed away my time for "You"~ frown....cont....

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 6:51:00 PM

    "You can see her on a silver drenched moonlit night...."~Smile~And, she sounds soo very enchanting & mesmerizing!!!:):)~"Hello Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Christie & Your Little Angel Brianna!!!!:):)~Smile, You know I have missed "You" don't You!!!?:):)~I hope that "You & Brianna" are doing wonderfully!!!? And, that You both had a blessed & splendid weekend!!!?:):)~Smile, I caught this amazing write....cont....

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 4:28:00 PM

    Your visuals are absolutely awesome in this, Chrisite. I love the 4th and 9th stanzas but the whole write is beautiful! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 3:13:00 PM

    Exquisite; soft, passionate, smooth, totally breathe taking; love the sensual flow and your layout just tops it all off. Love and Light... LaBella

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 1:47:00 PM

    How deliciously creative! God bless and thank you!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 12:59:00 PM

    really love falling hopelessly into the web of a good poem's grasp, this poem is mesmerizing, trully sensational! Jim

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 10:50:00 AM

    Thanks for you kind words today Christie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 6:16:00 AM

    Is this the Nymph that wrecked the ships of - who was it. Ulysses? - I can't remember. at any rate, your poem is wonderful, with all the colorful imagery, sound of the sea, the salt air. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 2:37:00 AM

    Beautiful Christie - love verse 6, awesome images - wow, she sounds like a smokin hot, fish-lady! lol excellent hun, love, Kristin p.s-thanks for your comment yesterday...XO

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 1:09:00 AM

    Your open imagination is nice. Nice fantasy, painted a lovely scene...Raul

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 3:51:00 PM

    Did you that this is Oshun, the river goddess, the orisha from the culture of animism. Did you she is most beautiful to men, most desirable in dance, most vengeful when her family is threatened. She has been fragmented in many myths, but your poem gives peace. Love always

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 2:22:00 PM

    talk about lovely, you paint with words

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 9:53:00 AM

    Sweet words from a sweet imagination .Thanks Christie for your kind words about my haiku.Have a great weekend.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 8:03:00 AM

    Imagery is outstanding, along with your vivid imagination. Presentation beautiful as I long to continue reading. An intriguing fantasy that should have a sequel! Well done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 8:03:00 AM

    This is wonderful Christie....her body is nubile whispering temptation..love that sweet line...this entire piece is wonderful and it moves brilliantly..well done.

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 7:51:00 AM

    Your beautiful "Water Sprite" recalls images of mermaids and sirens, delightful fantasies of sailors. I love the way this poem dances in rhythm. Very creative! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 7:31:00 AM

    I LOVE THE LAYOUT, awesome Christie! Goddess of foam though ummm and ick...but totally beautiful