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  1. Date: 9/1/2009 11:13:00 AM

    You made me laugh!! : ) Sarcastic piece, my friend! Great job...congratulations on being featured this week, Deneith! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 4:36:00 AM

    Congratulations, Deneith, on having your well-written funny-sad-funny... poem featured this week. I think I'll favorite this one. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 3:13:00 AM

    Very funny and well written Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 2:02:00 AM

    Deneith, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 4:24:00 PM

    Bring back Ronald and let kids have some fun! Enjoyed the perspective in this poem. Got a chuckle out of the ending. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 1:03:00 PM

    This is horribly funny! You speak the truth! Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! A definite round of applause for you! Congratulations on your well deserved feature.

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 8:02:00 AM

    This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great friend! Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 4:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deneith. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:36:00 PM

    What a mcshame. He was a descendent of old McDonald. He had a farm. What can I say but E- I- E- I- OOO. There aren't too many places I haven't eaten. My wife told me to get in shape. ROUND is a shape. Just one more McCheeseburger. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 8:54:00 AM

    omg i love it. and by the way wendy's is better anyway. :) and just wondering is he really dead?

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 4:13:00 PM

    Funny!!!! Nice rhyming, too. Is he really dead?

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 3:43:00 PM

    This was absolutely hysterical, Deneith! I was laughing out loud by the time I got to the "nugget box" coffin. And "Burger King" turned down the fill-in role! I would absolutely love to see one about little Wendy! Thank you, thank you, thank you for making me laugh until I had a "Mcflurry belly ache."

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 3:54:00 AM

    A great and funny bit of commercial, a very engaging serve of verse in humor. Love