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Women

Sometimes
women are not else than fire,
hot and spicy.
If they touch your white clothes with their blame
that will burn you away to nothing.
But sometimes
women look like dew,
cool and pure.
So, do spatter your clothes with their clarity
and wash your face, hands and legs
with their purity
Then stand up
Look at yourself
Ouch…
Who else has got the body stronger than a man’s?
Who else got the face brighter than  a man’s?
So...
who are you actually, women?

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  1. Date: 3/22/2009 2:42:00 PM

    Thats the great mystery isn't it Tavip ... believe me sometimes we wonder who the blank, blank men are ... LOL ... another wonderful write from you!! Glad you have come to the Soup!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 11:18:00 AM

    Hello, Tavip, welcome to the soup. Well, Sir, they are our complement, not our counterparts, and we love in them is often what we fear in ourselves. God bless you