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Colors of Dawn


Colors of Dawn
       by Amy Swanson

Peach-gold tones shimmer
       -- mist from twilight disappears
kiss of sun peeks through
        swirls of pink and lavender
        bids a gentle good morning

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  1. Date: 5/25/2011 10:57:00 PM

    Soup mail..

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 10:50:00 PM

    Enjoyed the write Amy,

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 12:12:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL! LAINIE

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 11:28:00 AM

    Beautiful scene painted with your words. Great job...Raul

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 9:47:00 AM

    Lovely writing Amy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today.

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 7:33:00 AM

    Sweet soft write. Vince

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 4:14:00 PM

    Hello my kindred friend. *^_^* You paint such a fabulous and pretty picture here. I love colors in poems. Almost as much as I do chocolate. LOL Wonderful. The sun has been shining here and it is making me come slowly out of my shell. :) :) Love your crabby friend swishing her lion tail in happiness.

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 8:34:00 AM

    Your colorful sunrise is an awesome sight to behold. Your picture is painted so well!

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 8:31:00 AM

    Amy this is so beautiful. I felt like I was watching it. So gorgeous your words are so perfect. Wonderful write my friend. Blessings, ~Michaela~

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 7:48:00 AM

    Wow. Gorgeous! It is so gray here, this a lovely respite from the dreary. Lovely! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 7:27:00 AM

    Love the perfect pastel image this poem creates! Lovely, Amy! ~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 6:27:00 AM

    Oooowwwwm this is so tender, soft and colorful. Love it. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 6:02:00 AM

    this is outstanding... each line outclasses eachother! i love the nature too... its so vast... and the dawn is my favourite of all... wish i could stay up one day and watch the peach gold and the swirls of lavender... excellent tanka!! take care, Amy! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 5:43:00 AM

    I can read your work all day---