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Promise

I knew in the light
that shone on your lovely head,
that awoke the jewels in your eyes,
and the diamonds in your smile,

that it would never leave...
Not once more would I ever breathe
an air as sweet as that you've breathed
once upon a moon-kissed college breeze.

Oh, if only to touch your skin,
drench it like the hot, naked rain
as you purse your luscious lavender lips
and dance away on your bar-sooted feet

to be the sun that lay beside you
in your bed as you awake
if only to feel your greater warmth
and your heart beat, just once, for me.

The nights we laugh and shoot the breeze
are enough for a lifetime of memory.
Yet always will I find matters of the heart
difficult deserts to cross when all alone.

A kiss, a death-
but not for a moment I wept,
for I shall ever feel...
your presence in my heart.

By your side, a servant to remain
happy and haunted by my silent sin.
Seeing this end, I trudge onward unflinching
eyes wide open, fearless, to certain doom.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:30:00 AM

    beautiful ...very romantic :) nice done..thanks Chris :) SK

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 8:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 11:09:00 AM

    "A kiss, a death-/ but not for a moment I wept,/ for I shall ever feel.../ your presence in my heart."...beautiful....romantic lines, Chris!! Congratulations on being featured this week! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 4:31:00 AM

    Congratulations, Chris, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Your words bring a pallate of feelings ranging from joy to sadness and back. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 2:04:00 AM

    Chris, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 8:00:00 AM

    This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great Chris! Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 4:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Chris. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 11:23:00 PM

    'moon-kissed college breeze'... excellent and yes so passionate! Chris, wow! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 10:19:00 PM

    Passionate and beautiful, Chris!