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A Machine For

I feel no pain I know no fear.

I'm just a tool for war I can't shed no tears.

But is this the life that I'm suppose to live.

They said I can make it if I just believe.

I just want to know which destination is waiting for me.

Will God accept me at the pearly gates or will he rebut me.

Will I be saved or will I burn in hell for all eternity.

I can make it if I believe I'm just a machine trap in this world of slavery.

A machine that was made for war my life is full of misery.

I'm a high tech machine a tool for war my heart is cover with scars.

The pain is tearing me apart why am I part of this ghetto war.

I'm a machine with a soul but yet I have no heart.

The streets is apart of me so death is my art.

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  1. Date: 6/10/2009 10:40:00 AM

    We all want to Know.We all wish.It always God's will,Have Hope*.*

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 6:57:00 PM

    This Is So Deep Dion Babii. You Got A Soul And A Heart Though. I Bet Youve Seen Some Pretty Bad Stuff, Just Like Ive Been Though Bad Stuff. Your Not Just A Machine, Your A Person, Alive. If You Didn't Have A Heart You Wouldn't Hurt. Trust Me On That One. Stay Strong Babii Boy. Peace <3 Boo

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 2:36:00 PM

    THIS POEM IS SO DEEP,ITS LIKE YOU ARE TRAUMATIZED,YOU SAY YOU ARE A MACHINE WITH SOUL BUT NO HEART,THATS HOW YOU FEEL AND YOU DESCRIBED IT SO WELL,BUT SEARCH DEEPER,YOU WILL FIND YOUR HEART.THE PAIN IS TEARING YOU APART OF COURSE COS YOU HAVE A HEART.GREAT POEM,THE REALITY OF WAR AND ITS AFFECTS,ITS LIKE YOU VE BEEN THERE-CHEERS-CHARMA