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Defeated Suicide- I love you mom

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Defeated Suicide- I love you mom

She wept undefeated in the game life
Bitterly victorious to breath once more
She murmurs thoughts of a shattered mind
Tears course routes within wrinkles of time 
Yet she smiles, murmuring the unknown

I watch as my all begins to withdrawal 
Reminiscing her tender contentment with life
Contagious tears uncover my artificial strength
Why? 
Why must the only thing I love want to leave
Why torment the mind an angel 
Why is the only reply i should imply to God, Jesus, or whoever is listening
Why?

I love you mom, get well soon.






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  1. Date: 3/18/2009 6:54:00 PM

    So very sad and heartfelt..I pray for you and your Mother!! A brave write.. Hugs, Robin

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 9:43:00 AM

    So touching the poem presents me with a private moment shared reveal. The rhythm is exactly as I would breathe. Peace!

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 4:14:00 AM

    This is poem from the heart brother..so much love flowing with the whys in this piece..thanks for the love and compliment James...we are on the same path..much love brother.

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 10:54:00 PM

    Beautiful write for your mother. So heart wrenching and loving. Extremely well written. Peace, Love, Light and Good Health be with you and yours. Smiles from Lolita