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COSMIC ORGASM

There are so many passions in everywhere
And will be more and more
They lay scattered on bedrooms, streets,
leaves, flowers, phones, televisions,
In schools, parks and cars
At seas, forests, animals and web sites
Even also in the air and space.
Too many passionate temptations spread out
And will be more and more
It really makes us flesh crept.
By touch of skin,
By making eyes at each other,
By thermal and electric-magnetic radiation or another
They raise our heartbeat
To pursue satisfaction of the passionate lusts.
Our atmosphere might be chock-full of them now
I can feel it
Yet I do not know what will happen
If our air which we need a breath of
Pile up with passionate desires
And is beginning to reach orgasmic stage.
Do you?

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  1. Date: 3/20/2009 4:31:00 AM

    Without prepositions your lines engorge themselves in metaphors blooming.

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 8:28:00 PM

    LOL amazing love the titled love the poem great write bro -/JSkylar/

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 6:44:00 PM

    I do not know the answer to this question but it definately sounds like it would be a magical collision. LOL Well done. Smiles from Lolita