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Ice Cream Day

Sticky vanilla drips over his tiny pinky.
Rainbow sprinkled lips smile gratitude.
His face dodges mother`s attempt to destroy his delight.
The waffle softens in his palm,
Teeth clenched,he devours soggy leftovers.
It is a global warming sort of Ice cream day.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2009 4:26:00 PM

    Its Winter On my island ,but yummy i need an icecream now,chocolate and vanilla pls..lovely poem Robin--Charma

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 8:44:00 AM

    Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. Creative view on an ordinary event--one most readers will relate to. Love the thought of "Rainbow sprinkled lips." Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 6:40:00 AM

    My major weakness! If it weren't for ice cream, I'd still be able to see my feet. Vince

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 5:27:00 AM

    great fun! Jim

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 10:36:00 AM

    LOL..a global warming sort of ice cream day..wicked line..that stole the show..

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 2:35:00 PM

    Hi and you didn't do that when you was a baby, I guess we all did. Made me smile. God bless. Leon

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 1:40:00 PM

    Totally adorable! And why am I drooling here? Love waffles with ice cream. : ) Oh my gosh, this is an absolutely precious picture. Pure joy captured in a poem. Hope you took a real pic too! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 11:13:00 AM

    This is just truly precious. I smiled through the entire thing. Beautiful writng. Love Christie