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Rock ... Rock

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Rock ... Rock

Rock ...

Rock ...

The dry leaves crackle under our blanket
One of only two sounds that find me
The other is her

Rock ...

Rock ...

Pure and lovely
Wanted and wanting
She is all

Rock ... 

Rock ...

Skin against skin
Joy upon joy
We find heaven for a time

Rock ...

Rock ...

There is no pain and we suffer not
There is only Us
Us and the autumn leaves

Rock ...

Rock ...

I can not tell her sweat from mine
Everything is as one
As our bodies

Rock ... 

Rock ...

I hear my name on her lips
It sounds natural
It feels right

Rock ...

Rock ...

Her hair dances across my face
It smells of strawberries
Strawberries and Us

Rock ...

Rock ...

I feel it and her body tenses and trembles
I see the passion being excised
I see the pleasure become too much

Rock ...

Rock ...

It rolls over me and I lose control
For a moment I feel one with the entire world
I hear her playful laugh
                                  Her shy laugh  
                                                      Her dirty little girl laugh

Rock ...

I fall to the blanket
The crunching leaves greet me 
With dry and welcome applause

I love her
I love her

I think that she loves me, too

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  1. Date: 12/23/2009 11:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Bradley. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:56:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 2:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Bradley! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 11:15:00 AM
    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 7:17:00 PM
    Thanks everybody!

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 11:59:00 AM
    Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 3:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 4:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Bradley. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 12:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 11:50:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 9:57:00 AM
    Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 12:38:00 PM
    just a wonderful journey into love, passion and play..Light & love