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Falling up!!!

Soul ascending
freeing
weightless thoughts
lifted shoulders
eyes to nowhere
searching 
plunging its way to abandonment.....
sounds whisper
light 
sight unrestored
cautious heart....
Flaming bird
sweeping.....

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  1. Date: 11/21/2010 7:15:00 AM

    Yes! Talent here. Great imagery! Blessings, Joy (Jew)

  1. Date: 3/13/2009 8:08:00 AM

    Karena, wonderful images of a soul cllimbing to heaven. And the "flaming bird (perhaps a phoenix rising from the ashes) sweeping" up as well. Clever title, too. Sparked my interest! Love, Carolyn