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Stolen Heart


You stole my heart 
I could not see
but I felt it 
inside of me

You stole my heart
you did not think
that yours would part
but I stole it, in return

Something's gone
but something's left
It is your heart 
that I have kept

You stole my heart
so I stole yours
but would I let go
if you let go first?

No, I want your heart
and you want mine
Is this something 
rare to find?

Yes, a heart like yours
is rare to find
I'll take your heart
if you'll keep mine.

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  1. Date: 5/8/2009 2:54:00 PM

    this was beautiful! the emotion was strong and vivid. i really enjoyed this one as well! you are an excellent poet!

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 5:06:00 PM

    Beautiful! =)

  1. Date: 3/15/2009 2:24:00 PM

    You are a very strong woman Maryam! Be carefull with those 2 hearts! Love & Light

  1. Date: 3/15/2009 11:39:00 AM

    Maryam, This is an enchanting poem beautifully written. Most enjoyable thing is simplicity and purity of thoughts -free of complications. I pay my tribute to you. Thanks also for your eloquent comments on my poem 'Do not Knock'. God Bless You. - Sincerely, Mohammad.

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 10:38:00 AM

    Beautiful poem, Maryam! You've captured the emotions very nicely and I, too, lve the last stanza of this very touching rhyme. Well done! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 3/13/2009 6:56:00 PM

    Awe...this is so sweet...I especially like the last stanza...

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 8:43:00 PM

    WOW! Extrordinary poem! Thanks for the lovely comment on my featured poem "Life is a Tree." With I being 13 and getting great comments from wonderfull poets like you, means alot to me! Much love, ~Catherine

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 7:37:00 PM

    So bittersweet...well done, Maryam.

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 2:53:00 PM

    This would make a perfect Valentine Card....always, Christy