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Forgiveness (word morph)

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Forgiveness (word morph)

Crippling fear
When I won't hear
A word could heal
My endless hell

Removing smear
I would swear
A heart could swell
Beyond its shell

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  1. Date: 10/2/2009 4:40:00 PM

    So much depth in this concise poem. Nice word evolution. The emotion comes through the lines. Keep on writing! Have a good weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 3:54:00 PM

    Sometimes forgiveness is excrutiating. You have captured that in this work. Very raw and visceral. Best wishes, Sara

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 9:34:00 AM

    Forgiveness is one of the greatest things we have to offer others, and you convey your feelings well in this thoughtful poem. Truly moving! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 9:30:00 AM

    i totally understand what you mean about undoing the attitude sometimes we got to have the freedom to write what we want!! & i think you can take it upon yourself to get there i have! thats why i started writing happy stuff and not sad poems cause that not me!! my friends like it when i write sad writes they understand those better! Yoni you are welcome to express your opinions as you wish!! i have written that in my poem too! and thank you for sharing your thoughts, always appreciated! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 2:19:00 AM

    nicely done!! well expressed ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 8:53:00 PM

    Love this poem Yoni. Good write.

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 7:52:00 PM

    Yoni an excellent job on this - God Bless, MJ