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Undying Love

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Undying Love

Many days may pass me by
but my love for you will never die

Although your love may not be true
I'll always have true love for you

My sad heart has lost its will to live
for to you my love I cannot give

Many days may pass me by
but my love for you will never die





Note:  This is the first official poem I ever wrote.
I was 15 and it was at this time of year (1978).
I thought it would be fun to share it with you.  Over 
the years I have made a few grammatical changes
but it is essentially the same.  Love, Robin

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  1. Date: 3/11/2009 3:36:00 PM

    "My sad heart has lost its will to live, for to you my love I cannot give"~Smile~Wow~I can only imagine, how truly, beyond desribable You really are~and I say this with the most sincerest of hearts!!!!~It is very rare, from my experiences within this world, when one meets someone as "Beautiful As You Are Within!!!!" ~Smile~It is such a joy to know "You!!!!"~"My Love Forever To You, John!!!!":):) On we go....

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 3:28:00 PM

    "So Very Beautiful!!!!"~Even back then dear, "You" had this soft and gentle heart and soul inside of "You!!!"~You were born with such an amazing spirit "Beautiful Robin!!!!"~One which has transcended Your entire lifetime dear~Always so very clear to see!!!!....cont....

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 9:31:00 AM

    1978 was the year I returned to the Navy Reserve after a nine year absence. My sons were 8 and 7. You were just beginning to establish yourself as a poet. They were good days. Vince

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 2:36:00 PM

    Robin, even as a teen you had a gift for words. Thanks for reading "Breaking." It's good to be back! Love to you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 2:11:00 PM

    The inception of a wonderful reign. This is a lovely poem that embarked your poetic journey, nice job...Raul

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 4:59:00 AM

    Aww Robin, teenage love is so powerful. Such a beautiful, emotional first poem. Cherish it. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 12:51:00 PM

    Nothing more earth shattering than teenage loves. Nice work kiddo

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 12:01:00 PM

    you have a gift keep postig

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 8:56:00 AM

    Yes Robin,your gifting was glowing even then.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.The link below should be okay re archimboldo http://www.abcgallery.com/A/arcimboldo/arcimboldo.html

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 7:41:00 AM

    At fiftenn you already had the gift of words Robin..Well done.