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God's Love

Exhilaration
           Your majesty to unfold
                                      The gift of springtime

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  1. Date: 2/11/2012 8:51:00 PM

    How strange that you would think of me as Elijah The Prophet, Laurie. Whaat if I told you that I was he. Would you believe God? Read Malachi the last chapter the 4th and 5th verse. Believe it or not. God Bless You precious Ivory Dove.

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 12:38:00 PM

    What a wonderful perspective of spring. Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational and uplifting poem with us. Thank you for your kincd words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 4/30/2009 2:31:00 PM

    Congrats on your win my friend, this was truly amazing..Best Wishes Always, Love Tyesha

  1. Date: 4/30/2009 1:11:00 PM

    Bringing spring time back to the Creator? Seems obvious; but I would have never thought of that! Brilliant! Congratulations on your placement in the Springtime contest.

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 4:08:00 PM

    Great write. Congratulations on placing third in the Springtime contest. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 11:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 9:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 9:34:00 AM

    Congrats on placing third Laurie...Raul

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 8:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Laurie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 8:14:00 AM

    Congratulations Miss Laurie....Now this one has excitement over springtime written all over it!!! :)...God's amazing gift!

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 5:19:00 AM

    3rd. place in Carol's Contest! Congratulation, Laurie. This is lovely. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 3:53:00 PM

    Very nice, Laurie, and true to the haiku format! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/12/2009 4:10:00 AM

    we're still waiting here in Mn. (-3 below this am!) sweet haiku! Laurie, thx for comments, I had that dream every nite for 6yrs. when I was a little boy, everyone in my family would hear me wake with a start in the middle of the night, call out to me, "are you ok?" & go back to sleep! Jim

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 8:42:00 AM

    Smile~And of course, "I saved the best for last, but, by far, not the least!!!!~Smile~"I Love Your Faith Laurie!!!!"~To myself~"It makes 'You' stand out even brighter among the crowd!!!"~It has been a sincere joy and pleasure visiting with "You" today dear gifted lady!!!! And, I look forward to it very soon again!!!~"My Love To You & Your Loves Always, John!!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day!!!"~Bye Dear!:):)

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 9:23:00 PM

    Dear Laurie,This is a very Beautiful Expression of YOUR muti-TALENTED POETIC ARTISTRY ALWAYS YOURS...HG LAURIE, YOUR comment "Write on young(OLD) Esquire, write on" I did I ask YOU to Read my POEM "The Heart of a POET -- Speaks (Part 2) I would like YOUR thoughts on it ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 1:33:00 AM

    Beautifully written, nice haiku...Raul

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 11:40:00 PM

    Hello Laurie, this is a well-penned Haiku. I love this short form of a poem. Keep on sharing. Ernilando

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 6:40:00 PM

    Dear Laurie, Excellent Spring Haiku Good Luck in the contest I have a couple of Haiku that one word is 5 syllables This is truely Perfect in all aspects of Haiku ALWAYS...HG Laurie I read your comment on Ruben O's POEM "Caramel--Dulce de Leche"First off I am a man that knows how to cook 30 years as a Chef 15 more learning the trade the recipe Ruben gave is more of a Bread Pudding a true Dulce de Leche takes at least a week to be perfected I also teach Culinary Arts in College Yours...HG

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 5:47:00 AM

    Great job, Laurie! Beautiful Haiku. "Your Majesty to unfold" is excellent. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 5:07:00 AM

    absoluetly true... you are no exception yourself, you poems reflect life... and thats how i like... this haiku is wonderful!! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/8/2009 1:45:00 AM

    Beautiful, inspiring and magestic, well done. :) Did you figure out the centering thing? Love, Kristin

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 6:14:00 PM

    Everything coming back to life,Gods creationwhat a beautiful sight< Marie

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 6:09:00 PM

    We're all longing for spring are we not? This is nice. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 12:06:00 PM

    Exactly the way I was feeling outside today! (Wish I wrote this!) Simply beautiful! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 11:48:00 AM

    Wonderful uplifting and inspirational poem. Beautiful! Blessings to you for sharing it. Karen

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 10:53:00 AM

    A beautiful poem, and you cannot out do God's handy work. spring is proof in the puddin. Blessings, Ron

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 10:48:00 AM

    This beautiful my friend..Love the title and the words breathe spring.

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 9:39:00 AM

    The first word says it all !! Bring it on!! :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 8:53:00 AM

    beautiful... the poem beautiful

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 8:49:00 AM

    Beautifully breathtaking, Inspiring and uplifting-Spring is one of the many gifts of love Our Lord unfolds.. I can't wait until it arrives~Powerful Haiku....Huggs~ Tyesha