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An Offering

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An Offering

 I offer you a glance
and our eyes instantly lock.
An unexpected shiver runs through me
and time stands still on the clock.
 
I offer you my hand
and you take mine warmly into yours.
No words have to be spoken
yet we have opened so many doors.
 
I offer you a dance
and our bodies meld together.
We are both in awe and astonished,
both wanting this to last forever.
 
I offer you a kiss
which makes us quiver in delight.
The passion and the pleasure
intensifies through the night.
 
I offer you my heart
and I trust that you won't break.
To fall in glorious love
is a risk we yearn to take.

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Hi Cecilia, I liked the ebb and flow of your work. This piece kept my interest from start to finish, i also liked its musicality, when speaking the words. You have a nice day.....Michael

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Very nicely done Cecilia ;} yes they will get theirs one day "Beauty Queen" ;} you have an awesome day ;}

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:56:00 AM
    Well worth the risk, this is lovely Cecilia.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:23:00 PM
    I really like this one. It kinda inspired me to write something now, merci beacoup!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 9:51:00 AM
    Genuinely enjoy yhe way this piece seems to just unfold itself. Very touching. Congratulations on being featured this week - Chuck

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 3:39:00 PM
    One of the best love poems I've read in a while, congrats on being featured as its extremelly well done. Gordon

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:26:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured.. Patrick

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:01:00 AM
    the perfect love poem, i was wooed by5 the romance through out the poem.

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 7:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cecilia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 10:46:00 PM
    This is really nice, Cecilia. It would work really well in that new contest on romance. Only catch is that you have to write in a form that goes by the first initial of your name.For you, a C or A. I really enjoyed this!

  1. Date: 12/13/2009 9:04:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Cecilia, your poetry is very very good, i do hope you write more >> kindest regards >> James

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 10:57:00 AM
    Wow, loved this poem! Ultra passionate and romantic, Beautiful!!

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 9:31:00 AM
    Cecilia, indeed, you have much to "offer" the reader (as well as your lover) in this great poem filled with loving images! Nice work! Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 7:38:00 AM
    quiver in delight... ahh!! really lovely!! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 7:23:00 AM
    Harliquin Romance Quality! Nice Poem.