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Brat on Base

Beastly brat coddled
Daughter like mother
Father overcome

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  1. Date: 4/1/2009 5:31:00 PM

    This creates clear images in my mind. I have seen this situation and it is not pretty. Kids need lots of love but coddling is a whole nother ball game. Excellent Senryu my dear friend! Love Ya! Robin