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Beauty in a Bubble

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Beauty in a Bubble

she smiles behind
the bubble
it's shimmery translucence
enhances her
enticingly out of reach
yet i reach out
touching the bubble, i notice
its firmness
but not hard like stone
it's supple
like youthful skin
that can be pierced
and its life giving blood released
her smile falters
has i remove my hand
from the bubble
we talk some more
her laughter is infectious
i lose all track of time
watching, listening, and learning
but later has we say goodbye
i am the one smiling
smiling because i know
that i will return tomorrow
but this time with a safety pin
so i can bust that %@!#$! bubble

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  1. Date: 4/21/2009 8:07:00 PM
    How witty and clever you are with your magnificent work Brian. Enjoyed this much!

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 3:33:00 PM
    yeah im reading this one now,i'm watching listening and learning too-cos a lot is written here-it flows wonderfully-i can lend you a safety pin-smile;-)-charma

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 1:12:00 AM
    Great imaginative write Brian with a twist,Fine work here.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 3:01:00 PM
    That last line gave me a chuckle...very cleverly written. - Monique