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Paradise..

Like warm summer rain
you are gentle with my heart
held in your tender hands

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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 4:01:00 PM

    ‡ Sounds As Though The Most Beautiful In Beautiful Love, Sweet Beautiful Christie Moses! Tis Easy To See From Your Words I Have Viewed Why It Would Be, This Love For You. Joy To Have Read Your Poetry Again, Especially, Since 'You Are' One The Most Amazingly Gifted As Profoundly Beautiful, Poets My Eyes Have Ever Beheld! Be Happy Stay Beautiful And, 'Joyful Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/12/2009 10:54:00 AM

    Christie,...thank you for your comment. I liked very much "Paradise",...i can't wait to read more!

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 10:52:00 AM

    Christie, your loved one sounds like a great person. We do feel like we're in Paradise when we find love, don't we? Very touching! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 3:05:00 PM

    So simple, so meaningful and so beautiful. Déirdre

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 4:59:00 PM

    the feeling of comfort is felt through this write .....great job!

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 3:31:00 PM

    Who can make 15 words this pretty? Answer:Christie Moses You are alright for a white girl I tell ya!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 5:09:00 AM

    This is nice Christie, so smooth and mellow.. thanks for your comment about my poem, The Tail of a Fat Cat, Smudge the cat is just fine, hopefully no more leaping from high places, I am happy you enjoyed it.. spirit and soul, constance

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 5:35:00 PM

    This is so romantic, Christie! And a great image. Nice, very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 1:18:00 PM

    Thank you Christie. ... somewhere in my sleepy and numb head I am over joyed.... what an honour..... thank you !

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 12:53:00 PM

    Simply lovely, Christie. Beautiful and tender Senryu. Awesome job! Love Robin

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 8:14:00 AM

    Christie, I love Senryu and I love your piece. God bless. Ernilando

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 6:55:00 AM

    *^_^* I'm glad you did! :D ..... here, have some chocolate - I just opened a fresh box. ;)

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 6:34:00 AM

    Hello my kindred friend :) what a lovely senryu! Delicate and pretty, has such a soft feel, I just love it! Check out Arany's chocolate mousse epulaeryu, it's YUMMY! hehe We so seriously need a chocolate club or something on here. HAHA :P Hope you have a warm sunny weekend my crabby-but-not-crabby friend. ;) Love, your lioness friend with a teeny shell in her backpack ;) Hug your little sweetie for me.

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 6:46:00 PM

    Sweet as warm sunshowers, beautiful. :) Love, me

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 6:18:00 AM

    very warmly done

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 12:45:00 AM

    How lovely, and what a trust, so sweet!!! Loved it Peace Fathima

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 11:57:00 PM

    Lovely images and sentiments Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 5:21:00 PM

    This is absolutely lovely, Christie! By the way...Thank you so much for your kind support! Donna

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 1:34:00 PM

    Subtle and beautiful words Christie...Raul

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 11:16:00 AM

    what more could a man do with such a precious thing.... perfect.

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 9:28:00 AM

    Just plain sweet. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 8:50:00 AM

    This is very beautiful my poetic friend.

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 8:43:00 AM

    ....and You Yourself, would be one of those right at the very top I would have to say!!!~And, in regrards to this Your write here~I can only hope and pray, that I myself, can forever fit into such a person, within "Your Precious and Priceless Life" in such a way!!!?~"My Love To You and Your Brianna, Forever, John!!!":))) On we go....

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 8:36:00 AM

    Smile~I read this and I thought~who would not wish to hold "You" within these ways? Especially after seeing such beauty about Yourself, within soo many different ways!!!~"Hello Gifted and Beautiful Christie, and Your Little Princess Brianna!!!"~You know I've missed "You" don't You!!?~I have a bit of commenting to catch up upon~so I must cut some of them short today; my comments that is....yet, the love of my heart and soul, in regards to some, shall never be cut short!!!....cont....

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 8:16:00 AM

    Sweetly and gently powerful. So lovely to read. Well done. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 7:47:00 AM

    Lovely work Christie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 6:40:00 AM

    The softness of this little poem is sooo sweet. Nicely done! ~love Carrie

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 6:25:00 AM

    My dear sweetfriend, Christie, yes that is truly paradise, to have that special someone hold you, your heart and be gentle with it. Lovely as always! Michael

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 6:14:00 AM

    Geez Christie so few words, so much emotion. It's very beautiful sweet pea. Love you bunches, Laurie

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 6:03:00 AM

    Oh my goodness! I just love this wonderful little tidbit that can be wirtten for a Hallmark card! WOW!