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Christie Moses
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Paradise..
Like warm summer rain you are gentle with my heart held in your tender hands
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Rachel St.Cross
Date: 11/20/2012 4:01:00 PM
‡ Sounds As Though The Most Beautiful In Beautiful Love, Sweet Beautiful Christie Moses! Tis Easy To See From Your Words I Have Viewed Why It Would Be, This Love For You. Joy To Have Read Your Poetry Again, Especially, Since 'You Are' One The Most Amazingly Gifted As Profoundly Beautiful, Poets My Eyes Have Ever Beheld! Be Happy Stay Beautiful And, 'Joyful Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *
James Peranteau
Date: 3/12/2009 10:54:00 AM
Christie,...thank you for your comment. I liked very much "Paradise",...i can't wait to read more!
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/11/2009 10:52:00 AM
Christie, your loved one sounds like a great person. We do feel like we're in Paradise when we find love, don't we? Very touching! Love, Carolyn
Deirdre Omaidin
Date: 3/10/2009 3:05:00 PM
So simple, so meaningful and so beautiful. Déirdre
Abe Lopez
Date: 3/7/2009 4:59:00 PM
the feeling of comfort is felt through this write .....great job!
Steve Voorhees
Date: 3/7/2009 3:31:00 PM
Who can make 15 words this pretty? Answer:Christie Moses You are alright for a white girl I tell ya!!
Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2009 5:09:00 AM
This is nice Christie, so smooth and mellow.. thanks for your comment about my poem, The Tail of a Fat Cat, Smudge the cat is just fine, hopefully no more leaping from high places, I am happy you enjoyed it.. spirit and soul, constance
Ruben O.
Date: 3/6/2009 5:35:00 PM
This is so romantic, Christie! And a great image. Nice, very nice. Ruben.
colin mitchell williams
Date: 3/6/2009 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Christie. ... somewhere in my sleepy and numb head I am over joyed.... what an honour..... thank you !
Robin L. Gass
Date: 3/6/2009 12:53:00 PM
Simply lovely, Christie. Beautiful and tender Senryu. Awesome job! Love Robin
Ernilando Tugaff
Date: 3/6/2009 8:14:00 AM
Christie, I love Senryu and I love your piece. God bless. Ernilando
Amy Swanson
Date: 3/6/2009 6:55:00 AM
*^_^* I'm glad you did! :D ..... here, have some chocolate - I just opened a fresh box. ;)
Amy Swanson
Date: 3/6/2009 6:34:00 AM
Hello my kindred friend :) what a lovely senryu! Delicate and pretty, has such a soft feel, I just love it! Check out Arany's chocolate mousse epulaeryu, it's YUMMY! hehe We so seriously need a chocolate club or something on here. HAHA :P Hope you have a warm sunny weekend my crabby-but-not-crabby friend. ;) Love, your lioness friend with a teeny shell in her backpack ;) Hug your little sweetie for me.
Kristin Reynolds
Date: 3/5/2009 6:46:00 PM
Sweet as warm sunshowers, beautiful. :) Love, me
Frank F. Atanacio
Date: 3/5/2009 6:18:00 AM
very warmly done
FATHIMA DAWOOD
Date: 3/5/2009 12:45:00 AM
How lovely, and what a trust, so sweet!!! Loved it Peace Fathima
Brian Strand
Date: 3/4/2009 11:57:00 PM
Lovely images and sentiments Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Donna Golden
Date: 3/4/2009 5:21:00 PM
This is absolutely lovely, Christie! By the way...Thank you so much for your kind support! Donna
Raul Moreno
Date: 3/4/2009 1:34:00 PM
Subtle and beautiful words Christie...Raul
colin mitchell williams
Date: 3/4/2009 11:16:00 AM
what more could a man do with such a precious thing.... perfect.
Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 3/4/2009 9:28:00 AM
Just plain sweet. God Bless. Vince
christopher higgins
Date: 3/4/2009 8:50:00 AM
This is very beautiful my poetic friend.
John Rhinem
Date: 3/4/2009 8:43:00 AM
....and You Yourself, would be one of those right at the very top I would have to say!!!~And, in regrards to this Your write here~I can only hope and pray, that I myself, can forever fit into such a person, within "Your Precious and Priceless Life" in such a way!!!?~"My Love To You and Your Brianna, Forever, John!!!":))) On we go....
John Rhinem
Date: 3/4/2009 8:36:00 AM
Smile~I read this and I thought~who would not wish to hold "You" within these ways? Especially after seeing such beauty about Yourself, within soo many different ways!!!~"Hello Gifted and Beautiful Christie, and Your Little Princess Brianna!!!"~You know I've missed "You" don't You!!?~I have a bit of commenting to catch up upon~so I must cut some of them short today; my comments that is....yet, the love of my heart and soul, in regards to some, shall never be cut short!!!....cont....
sharon weimer
Date: 3/4/2009 8:16:00 AM
Sweetly and gently powerful. So lovely to read. Well done. Love, Shar
Brian Strand
Date: 3/4/2009 7:47:00 AM
Lovely work Christie.Rgds Brian
Carrie Richards
Date: 3/4/2009 6:40:00 AM
The softness of this little poem is sooo sweet. Nicely done! ~love Carrie
Michael Degenhardt
Date: 3/4/2009 6:25:00 AM
My dear sweetfriend, Christie, yes that is truly paradise, to have that special someone hold you, your heart and be gentle with it. Lovely as always! Michael
Laurie Ginn
Date: 3/4/2009 6:14:00 AM
Geez Christie so few words, so much emotion. It's very beautiful sweet pea. Love you bunches, Laurie
Celeste Butler-Mendez
Date: 3/4/2009 6:03:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I just love this wonderful little tidbit that can be wirtten for a Hallmark card! WOW!