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Paradise..

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Paradise..

Like warm summer rain
you are gentle with my heart
held in your tender hands

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  1. Date: 3/12/2009 10:54:00 AM
    Christie,...thank you for your comment. I liked very much "Paradise",...i can't wait to read more!

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 10:52:00 AM
    Christie, your loved one sounds like a great person. We do feel like we're in Paradise when we find love, don't we? Very touching! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 3:05:00 PM
    So simple, so meaningful and so beautiful. Déirdre

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 4:59:00 PM
    the feeling of comfort is felt through this write .....great job!

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 3:31:00 PM
    Who can make 15 words this pretty? Answer:Christie Moses You are alright for a white girl I tell ya!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 5:09:00 AM
    This is nice Christie, so smooth and mellow.. thanks for your comment about my poem, The Tail of a Fat Cat, Smudge the cat is just fine, hopefully no more leaping from high places, I am happy you enjoyed it.. spirit and soul, constance

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 5:35:00 PM
    This is so romantic, Christie! And a great image. Nice, very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 1:18:00 PM
    Thank you Christie. ... somewhere in my sleepy and numb head I am over joyed.... what an honour..... thank you !

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 12:53:00 PM
    Simply lovely, Christie. Beautiful and tender Senryu. Awesome job! Love Robin

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 8:14:00 AM
    Christie, I love Senryu and I love your piece. God bless. Ernilando

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 6:55:00 AM
    *^_^* I'm glad you did! :D ..... here, have some chocolate - I just opened a fresh box. ;)

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 6:34:00 AM
    Hello my kindred friend :) what a lovely senryu! Delicate and pretty, has such a soft feel, I just love it! Check out Arany's chocolate mousse epulaeryu, it's YUMMY! hehe We so seriously need a chocolate club or something on here. HAHA :P Hope you have a warm sunny weekend my crabby-but-not-crabby friend. ;) Love, your lioness friend with a teeny shell in her backpack ;) Hug your little sweetie for me.

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 6:46:00 PM
    Sweet as warm sunshowers, beautiful. :) Love, me

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 6:18:00 AM
    very warmly done

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 12:45:00 AM
    How lovely, and what a trust, so sweet!!! Loved it Peace Fathima

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 11:57:00 PM
    Lovely images and sentiments Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 5:21:00 PM
    This is absolutely lovely, Christie! By the way...Thank you so much for your kind support! Donna

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 1:34:00 PM
    Subtle and beautiful words Christie...Raul

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 11:16:00 AM
    what more could a man do with such a precious thing.... perfect.

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 9:28:00 AM
    Just plain sweet. God Bless. Vince

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