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groupie

she wanted something that sunglasses couldn’t see 
and the first taste I could give her 
of what her eyes were looking for 
was something like a silver jet flyin’ 
carryin’ blueberries 
‘cross the sky 
to her favorite rock star

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  1. Date: 5/2/2009 9:45:00 AM

    Really am enjoying your "take" on it all ....

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 1:53:00 PM

    Interesting perspective in this poem. Enjoyed that you made your point in a concise way. The language is fitting for the topic. Creative approach. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good week! Karen

  1. Date: 3/3/2009 11:45:00 AM

    I don't ever like short poems as much as Il ike this one!! Solid bit of writing in just a few words. Well done!! Much love, Steve