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Micaela Alseth
Date: 3/7/2009 4:13:00 PM
This is just beautiful! I love the last line! Exquisite! Thank you so much for your encouragement on Waiting!
Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/6/2009 8:03:00 AM
Thought provoking and sensitive......well written!
Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 3/6/2009 6:59:00 AM
No life is meaningless, least not a talented young poet. Those who claim to have not sinned are usually the biggest sinners. This was a good write. God Bless. Vince
Laurie Ginn
Date: 3/5/2009 7:34:00 PM
Full of thought and really I find most of your writes to be, I love the second stanza.
Joyce Johnson
Date: 3/3/2009 4:57:00 AM
Nice rhyme and thought here. kKThank you for commenting on my "Retired". Love, Joyce
John Rhinem
Date: 2/28/2009 2:37:00 PM
Smile~I truly liked this write of Yours a lot! Hello Arany~It is good to finally make Your acquaintance! Sorry it seemed to take myself so long in doing so!? Busy busy~I hope that Your weekend is going wonderfully for yourself!? This was a very, soul searching and reaching write here~my very favorite types actually! For they always expose, a wonderful side of their writers I believe ~and this, whispered about a jewel inside of "You!!"~"Love & Warmth To You Always, John!"~Bye:)
john loving iii
Date: 2/26/2009 3:24:00 PM
well written. john
Michael Jordan
Date: 2/25/2009 12:38:00 PM
Arany - Certainly is one i can relate to in many ways - wonderful job on this poem - God Bless, MJ
Raul Moreno
Date: 2/25/2009 2:53:00 AM
Nice quatrain, Like Tyler I relate to the first stanza...Raul
colin mitchell williams
Date: 2/24/2009 12:36:00 PM
Hi Arany.. this poem has a very subtle poignancy to it.... very well done ! Thank you for your comments Arany
Brian Strand
Date: 2/24/2009 8:45:00 AM
Lik your style in this one AranyRgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Robin L. Gass
Date: 2/24/2009 7:53:00 AM
This is such a sad but beautifully written poem. I can relate to many of these feelings. Great expression, Arany. Love, Robin
sharon weimer
Date: 2/23/2009 5:40:00 AM
I try to believe there is a reason for everything. Hope you find the peace and light you seek. Well expressed. Love, Shar
christopher higgins
Date: 2/23/2009 5:27:00 AM
This is a very well writtten piece..the search continues..wonderful work.
Tyler Martin
Date: 2/23/2009 1:26:00 AM
Nice work in this poem, I relate to the first stanza, thanks for stopping by and dropping a comment. Tyler
