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As Night Descends...

Beckon these eyes a whisper in trees
Scarlet passion in hot molten heat
With your fiery touch I will hit my knees
Fevered oscillation on warm amber sheets

This skin awaits your raw carmine kiss
Breath…indrawn from smoldering flames
Inside deep eyes of sweet chocolate Swiss
In searing red throes I call out your name

Trembling in the blazing torch of your touch
I whimper blue....a shattered disarray
A blistered journey…you are my crutch
A bursting heart pulsing crimson display
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         Morning awaits a crushed coral flower
                     Entombed......inside an ebony tower

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:25:00 AM
    Amazing poetry from you!!

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 9:09:00 PM
    Another wonderful display of your lovely way with words..Beautifully written. Keep it up..Love it..Thanks for your comments on my: The Kids Have All Been Fed. She better not turn around too quick, I might kick her in her rear end...lol . That one made me cry when I wrote it, and I don't even have any kids. Don't even have a wife. I can still remember when my mom and dad use to fight and how much it use to keep me and my brothers and sisters upset. I left home when I was 17. Lawrence in Lou.Ky

  1. Date: 2/23/2009 1:37:00 AM
    Your work is a joy to read, you must be a reader to write work like this. Tyler

  1. Date: 2/22/2009 9:36:00 AM
    How it goes Miss Christie?? Another lovely love-sick write! I wish he'd come and sweep you away already...damn! =) So how've ya been stranger?? Much love, Steve

  1. Date: 2/22/2009 7:07:00 AM
    Your ability to pen passion is undeniable. You have the gift to capture uniquely and beautifully the depths of desire and longing. So awesome. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 2/21/2009 12:05:00 PM
    This is very intensely beautiful and passionate. Loved your unique colorful phrases, too.:) Love, Sara

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 11:51:00 AM
    ... reading this one.. yet again... and melting... I think you are my poetic idol..... LOL... Thanks for all your comments Christie....

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 10:57:00 AM
    Damn......wow.....I can't think of anything else to say.....are sonnets supposed to be this intense? I know they're usually love poems but somehow I don't think this one's about love (mental love)...I won't even bother analyzing the blue whimper.

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 7:30:00 AM
    So good to re-read Christie,so must add to my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 6:34:00 AM
    Passion in all its old glory. You are a wordsmith indeed. Who could help but be impressed by this fine write. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/19/2009 10:26:00 PM
    On warm amber sheets, great line, in this exquisite poem. Check out my poem Sonata in the Sheets...Beautiful sonnet Christie, you have a nice touch for them...Raul

  1. Date: 2/19/2009 3:16:00 PM
    Christie, you evoke such passion in this poem. I can really "FEEL" it. Wonderful! Thank you for your comments on "Hungry and Homeless Americans." It's a sad observation, isn't it? Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/19/2009 2:05:00 PM
    How do you do this? you have an amazing ability to write these works of art, and you just keep cranking them out. I love your passion for writing continue the great work....simply amazing...........

  1. Date: 2/19/2009 6:33:00 AM
    This is such a beautiful sonnet. It is breathtakingly passionate with the images you have conjured. Awesome writing, Christie. Thank you for your kind comment. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 9:26:00 PM
    Dearest lady why are your towers always ebony? What's inside you Lady K that these words pour from you so easily. Wonderfully, amazing and well done. Love you bunches, Laurie

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 1:40:00 PM
    Hi Christie.. the last two lines wrap this sonnet up beautifully in the title... as for the rest, well, description, imagery, colour and heat, just awesome... I think this melted its way straight through my screen and into my heart... as always Christie truly outstanding writing.... " poet "

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 1:26:00 PM
    Wow Christie The feel the look the sheer words of romance crumble me into clay. I love it what a great sonnet !! Its going to my favorites! Laura :)

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 8:12:00 AM
    wow Christie what imagery'I whimper blue....a shattered disarray' and what talent you share with us each day We are indeed priviledged..Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & observtions

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 7:22:00 AM
    You are so gifted, Christie...your sonnets especially, have such a quality as if written in another time...such romance! Lovely! ....(ps...you think it's either rum or vodka this early in the am??......just kidding???:)!!!!!!!!! Shame on me!! just couldn't help myself!

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 5:52:00 AM
    ....I hope things work out for you "Beautiful Christie Moses," it these emotions for someone else are truly upon "Your Endless Heart!?"~And if merely fiction~Smile~then even better, to know that "You" never hurt!!!?~"My Love To 'You & Your Angel Brianna, Forever, John!!!"~"Have A Blessed & Beautiful Day Dear Christie Moses!!!"~Bye:)

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