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Perplexed

I wake up and taste the sweet ambrosia of morning
-	You’re kisses are like wine
The day has broken and sends out its warning
-	And so concludes my reverie

The days is but a frenzied whirlwind
-	Shattered is the memory of so short ago
Racing forward like a turbulent storm
-	To meet my destiny’s challenge

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  1. Date: 2/27/2009 9:06:00 AM

    In the second line of the first stanza you want to say "YOUR kisses are like wine", right?? Or you want to say that "you and your kisses are like wine"?/ I'm like your poem: "Perplexed". Nice images and form. Keep on writing, Caroline. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 11:08:00 AM

    Thank you.

  1. Date: 2/18/2009 12:18:00 AM

    I have to say you have an interesting style of poetry. Hope to read more from you! ^.^