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  1. Date: 4/19/2009 5:44:00 AM

    I love this, so true pain can be viscious especially mental thank you for putting it into words Arany

  1. Date: 4/18/2009 7:55:00 PM

    So true and your description of pain is remarkable, an excellent write.

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 6:40:00 AM

    Miss Arany, very nice Couplet. The message is so profound, inspiring. Keep on sharing to the world your gift. Ernilando

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 5:15:00 AM

    a very good verse full of detail exellent writing

  1. Date: 2/16/2009 5:58:00 PM

    a nicely penned couplet with flowing descriptions and what this creature brings to its victoms,,,blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 2/12/2009 5:46:00 AM

    clveerly written--extreme flow :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 8:24:00 PM

    Nice Couplet.....Love,Christina

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 9:03:00 AM

    Arany - this couplet has wonderful flow and rhyme and it also carries a most profound message - great expression of emotions - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 7:44:00 AM

    Nice couplet Arany.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 6:40:00 AM

    Arany, this is such an emotionally filled piece. Pain inside can devistate and words are used as weapons. Beautifully written piece. Thanks for sharing. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 6:06:00 AM

    This is very descriptive..you brought the pain out in this piece. Nice form and well written. Good work.

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 6:02:00 AM

    Oh it sounds like painful headaches to me, or at least that'swhat I experience at times and yeah they come in silently too. Good use of the couplet form here and very good writing. Michael