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Soul Mates....

A familiar ambiance…she had known this air….
This sand she had felt on her feet before
Ripe red strawberries grew wild somewhere
For, they’d shared them on a quiet shore
Her soul felt stripped…..naked…left bare
A man once whispered love ever more

    These eyes of hers had never seen this place
         Yet her soul sang of his hands on her face

His fingers once kissed a gentle caress
On her starving mouth that craved his touch
His lips made her an angelic mess
Wild eyed passion…a brush fire crutch
His hands reminisced her summer dress
Love and fear that she could feel so much

      Yes, in a sometime, somehow she’d been here
            How she missed those distant eyes....so near....

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  1. Date: 12/23/2009 3:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on being a first round survivor Christie and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 11:01:00 PM

    Dear Christie, Congratulations on both entries making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 4:48:00 PM

    wowser a real bodice burner ;) soooooo romantic....I hope you showed your man this tribute? Congrad's hon. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:30:00 AM

    Hi hun, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 1:52:00 PM

    A great writer like you deserves to have two poems make it to the next round, Christie! Congratulations! Merry Christmas, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 11:43:00 AM

    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 12:26:00 AM

    This poem is just incredible !

  1. Date: 2/21/2009 3:12:00 PM

    Christie, genuinely moving and ripe with sad, descriptive images as well. "Angelic mess" paints such an ironic picture! You never fail to deliver! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 5:45:00 AM

    This one slipped by me, beautiful words and thanks for stopping by. The first stanza grabbed me...Raul

  1. Date: 2/14/2009 10:19:00 PM

    Christie....Im Back!! You're still breaking my heart with this "deprived lover" writing, I see . I love it!! Happy Valentines day darling...I hope someone is wooing you proper!! Much love, Steve

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 8:19:00 AM

    I get this... beautiful & mysterious. (Even if I hadn't already read what you said on one of Sharon's poems...!) :) This is a theme I've written about a few times too... love in another lifetime, searching for your soul mate (or as in mine, finding him & timing is not right.) You might like Mystic Walk, it's on that theme... it was one of the first poems I ever posted here - some others I've written too. The kindred-ness goes on & on! :) hehe! I hope so much that you find your soul mate. Love me

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 5:44:00 AM

    Christie - Good morning Hon - I loved your poem as alwys - You are truly a gift and your poetry is a treasure - I liked the way you used this form - YF4L - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 3:10:00 AM

    i love this Christie, you and those strawberries. :) So romantic, so sweet, so longing - love the 8th and 12th lines the best, excellent my dear! love Colins comment! Those are some hot socks! lol love, me p.s-check your email!

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 12:18:00 AM

    Beautiful form Christie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 9:23:00 PM

    "His hands reminisced her summer dress" what line .........great job!

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 6:24:00 PM

    Ps.-Smile-"Sweet Dreams To You Both-Precious Christie Moses!!!"-Goodnight:)

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 6:20:00 PM

    Smile-I believe that this withiin part, is how I would sum it all up, whenever I view these types of "Your Astonishing Writes!!!"-And again, the man whomever wins "Your Beautiful Heart" I Believe? In my opinion, will be one of the luckiest men, who has 'Ever' lived!!!-"My Love Always To 'You & Your Precious Brianna,' Forever, John!"-" Extremely Beautiful Write!!!!":)

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 6:14:00 PM

    Your images are so vivid-Your words are filled with such elegance and grace! It is almost as though, you are this dream of a lady, gliding through the nightime forest within your brlliiantly white and flowing dress-like an Angel-that looks beyond beautiful....cont....

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 6:08:00 PM

    "A man once whispered love evermore-these eyes of hers had never seen this place-yet her soul sang of his hands on her face.... "-Smile-So amazing "You Are!"-"You are mesmerizing, enchanting, alluring, and oh so very beautiful I believe!!!"-I have 'never' met a female writer, or perhaps any writer, whom wrote so wonderfully of love!!! Every male that read "You" I believe, would or could, easily fall in love with "You!!!"....cont....

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 5:59:00 PM

    "Hello Precious & Gifted & Beautiful Christie Moses & Your Priceless Little Brianna!!!"-You know I usually start my comments with "You" whenever You post-but today, I thought that I would the best for last-Smile-hopefully your still awake? But I have read this passionate and lovely write of Yours a few times---And it is 'Always' clear within Your wonderous words, how sincere and truly deep they really are!!!....cont....

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 3:49:00 PM

    Awesome write, Christie. Your talent never ceases to amaze me. Great title to this soul touching poem. Well said! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 11:04:00 AM

    You have such romance in your soul, Christie...this poem is ripe with beauty and love. Loved it!~ :) love, Carrie

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 10:25:00 AM

    "His fingers once kissed a gentle caress On her starving mouth that craved his touch His lips made her an angelic mess Wild eyed passion…a brush fire crutch His hands reminisced her summer dress Love and fear that she could feel so much" ... sheer genius Christie .... my sox are four feet away and smoking.... LOL

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 9:10:00 AM

    Another , superb WOW of rhyming brilliance , P P ...

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 8:14:00 AM

    Beautiful. Truly beautiful.

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 6:23:00 AM

    Wow. Incredible write with this interesting form. You are such an awesome talent my dear. Delicious passion with a touch of deja vu. : ) Love, Shar

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 5:10:00 AM

    There are a few poets here that I really enjoy reading.. and you are among them thanks so much for sharing :)

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 4:36:00 AM

    Christi, I have to agree with Chris, this is smoking hot, but not in a tawdry way but rather in a "wuthering Heights" kind of way. It has so much romance, feeling written into it, as you do with all your writes. It's beautiful! Michael

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 4:32:00 AM

    lovely write! so romantic! gosh the description! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 4:32:00 AM

    Fear always goes with love if you are past 17. You write as if you are rekindling memories and yet its every woman's heart. Lovely m'darling, Love me

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