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Holes

Whistling wind,
screaming in pain,
losing my mind,
kneeling in the rain.

I can't feel it,
the missing part,
I can't see it,
where is my heart?

ripped from my chest,
by your charms,
I can get no rest,
from the damage done in your arms.

I now have no trust,
I am always suspicious,
in my chest lies nothing but dust,
all because you were so vicious.

not love and kindness,
I lost all hope,
only bitterness was taught by my blindness.
one day I'll learn to cope.

now I stand alone,
cold and cruel,
chilled to the bone,
no longer anyone's fool.

so now I scream and shout,
you can see me stripped and naked,
I know what love is all about,
to be naive and taken.

so look my friends and you'll see,
I learned from the best,
but now I'll never be free,
because of the hole in my chest.

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  1. Date: 5/9/2009 4:59:00 AM

    You will be free. Here's how: When you think of him, get up, turn on the loudest fast music that you have. Then, dance ALONE! Dance wildly,fast(30 minutes) even when you don’t want to. Drown out every thought of him step by step. And while you're dancing, forgive yourself for being imperfect. We all are. Illiyanna, only you can fill that hole. Do it. Remembering the love? Stop! You MUST let go. (A "mother" lecture, again) It’s the only way to happiness (Been there) God bless you. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 3:45:00 PM

    Very good and very sad

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 1:10:00 PM

    Pain so perfectly expressed. Excellent poem. Thank you.

  1. Date: 2/22/2009 6:42:00 PM

    Illyanna, I hope the "missing part" that fills the "hole" in your chest returns so you can feel whole again. Very thought-provoking verse. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 11:12:00 AM

    Hee hee I meant "PLEASE, not PLEAS"....Leerie

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 11:10:00 AM

    Wow, this must be about someone I know, huh? Great write, pleas continue to enthrall us with more poems sweetie.....Leerie