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Rain

I followed the rain today
Through the wooded dry –
And when land crested
Caught only one drop –

I chased the sun today
Through cloudless sky –
And when day peaked
Caught only one ray –

I sat on a tree stump 
Under falling dusk -
Examining the vastness
Of this incompleteness –

And when night fell
Found myself saturated –
By the drop of rain
Placed in my eye to run –


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  1. Date: 4/26/2010 6:04:00 AM

    Pretty poem, please don't cry

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 3:06:00 PM

    Deborah, I very much enjoy being pulled into the endless thought, very few have that talent, you do! cheers!

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 4:00:00 PM

    Deborah a Wonderful write I could see and feel every emotion you wrote. I loved your use of nature to express yourself so well. Love Laura :)

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 1:35:00 PM

    Beautiful poetry and really loved the story telling in this poetry as well. enjoyed reading it and have a nice day.