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Another Haiku (number twenty one)

Snow storm in springtime
Silhouette of a stark tree
It's a winters tale

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  1. Date: 9/6/2009 10:54:00 AM

    I really like the descriptiveness of this Haiku. Sara

  1. Date: 4/30/2009 3:43:00 PM

    Beautiful A+.

  1. Date: 2/20/2009 3:37:00 AM

    Excellent haiku Déirdre, I like the last line...Raul

  1. Date: 2/17/2009 10:05:00 PM

    yea it is!! lovely winter... though harsh its being!! nicely done, Deirdre! thank you for your sweet comments!! appreciate them!! have a great day! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 2/12/2009 9:07:00 AM

    Oh the clarity in this keeps me in winter, though the days are doing their best to get warmer. Excellent form and read. Michael

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 8:23:00 AM

    Awesome Haiku. Vivid images are created here. The weather does what it will. Thanks for sharing! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 2/9/2009 12:00:00 AM

    Like the twist in L3 Deirdre.Keep them a'coming.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 12:10:00 PM

    Yes! I like the interaction of a late snowstorm with the idea of winter's tale. You may want to change winters to winter's in the last line. Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for your kind comments on my cinquain. Have a nice day. Karen

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 8:52:00 AM

    And , it wags today !! , Great 21 , Deirdre ...