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this time

he came of
his own volition

this time

he was rested
and i saw a
glimmer of
his old humor

in his eyes

a little put off
i played to his
mood and
the evening
went well

and you know

i felt relieved
some what comfortable

somehow

i guess i am
forgiving after
all

this time

you know, don't you
i am just that way
you know

how could i 
be hating someone
long after i forgot
to remembered
what the hate was
about

so i forgave again

this time

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  1. Date: 2/15/2009 12:37:00 AM

    well poetry allows one to learn and accept the different emotions!! it gives us the strength! lovely write... ~ Arany

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 10:17:00 AM

    Glad to hear you have a forgiving heart. Interesting format. Nice message. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 6:32:00 AM

    Forgiveness and love...go hand in hand...Very good write.

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 5:47:00 AM

    Janetta - I agree with Sharon - Forgiveness can be a beautiful thing and it's one area that I need to work on - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 4:46:00 AM

    Forgiveness can be a beautiful thing, especially for the person giving it. Simple but powerful write I can relate to very much. Well expressed. Love, Shar