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Eye Sonnet

In his eyes, I saw a certain divinity
that made me see his true affinity
He captivated me
When I looked at him, I could see
the colors he possessed were hard to believe
In his eyes, I saw clarity
I could not help but stay appreciating
the precious pair that glowed,
glistering with sparkle of life
Each blink revealed a new site
In his eyes, I saw and
experienced something
that I could only witness
when it is his eyes that I'm looking at....

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  1. Date: 3/17/2009 9:36:00 AM

    Nice use of rimes and literary effects. Congratulations. God bless you

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 1:41:00 AM

    '...appreciating...precious pair,' glowed glistering.' ...sweet alliteration. Strong phrasing and imagery... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 2:59:00 AM

    wow!!! really captivating.

  1. Date: 2/7/2009 4:26:00 PM

    Lovely poem. Nicely written. You can tell alot by a person eyes if you look deep enough.