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Alone

When the night was dark with a storm blowing wild
Why did you blow out the little flickering lamp of my life
Didnt you hear the pitiful wailing of the helpless infant
Abandoned by you, Oh! Mother

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  1. Date: 11/28/2009 8:45:00 AM

    After every dark night there is Hope for a dawn. Try to drift more towards Hope and do not worry even if there darkness all-around. You have the potentials to write good poetry. Keep it up and make it more optimistic. Best wishes and love Ravindra

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 3:02:00 AM

    POWERFUL TOT!

  1. Date: 2/4/2009 8:05:00 AM

    The emotion comes through your words in this poem. What a sad situation. Much to think about in this concise poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing. Karen