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PLease don't go.

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PLease don't go.

I feel his skin so close to mine,
I feel his hands carressing me lovingly.
I still feel him all over me.


I know he's there,
I hear his voice.
I feel his hands holding me.


I can tell him I love him,
but he always knows
everything before I tell him.


He makes me smile,
he makes me laugh,
I never feel this way with another,

He who knows me so well,
he knows I won't betry him,
I holds him closely.

He who knows I trust him,
does he lie?
I know he wouldn't.

Everytime he walks away,
I want him to stay,
and I whisper,

Please don't go.







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  1. Date: 1/28/2009 10:59:00 AM
    Love this poem of love..honesty about the heart and the willingness to reveal oneself is outstanding. Lovely write.