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Life Lost (Dedicated to Cory C and Corey P)

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Life Lost (Dedicated to Cory C and Corey P)

Like a bullet flying by
You flipped your car many times
Silver Car,
Shattered glass lay in the way
Shattered dreams thrown away

People lined the road where you wrecked
And made a cross in your erect
Memories are all we have
Memories we had
Memories we lost
Memories we shared.


So many tears
Were shed that day
So many hearts shattered in a unkind way
You were loved by so many
So many loved thee
A life left unspoken
Many left wondering
Why such a devasting thing happen to thee?

What good could come of this
What a tradegy
Maybe a soul can learn 
That driving fast isn’t fun
A hurtful thing you see
When the one you love
Leaves this earth and floats above

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  1. Date: 1/25/2009 10:44:00 PM

    Such a sad and heartfelt poem..your deepest emotions are pouring out here, the pain, suffering and wondering is expressed so clearly..A loved one was taken and you are left wondering why? So many people take too many risks in life, but life is so precious..I hope that someone learns and acknowledges that it's not cool to speed or drink and drive or do drugs or anything else reckless..There are consequences, deadly ones..I am truly sorry for your loss,Stay Strong..God Bless And Keep You.*Tyesha