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sequence EBB & FLOW

Whipped
by the
raging wind,
white horses ride
the
tide
until 
exhausted-
die upon the
shore

Inspired by Winslow Homer's paintings of the American seaboard at Maine

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  1. Date: 1/29/2010 6:40:00 PM

    Congrats Brian on "sequence Ebb & Flow" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 1/29/2010 1:40:00 AM

    Absolutely Beautiful! Poetry at it's finest. I see it and HEAR it; all in vivid splendor.

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 7:47:00 AM

    Buddhamus! Congrats. AR

  1. Date: 1/27/2010 6:46:00 AM

    Excellent verse here friend... Congrats on the feature this week.....:JP]

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 7:02:00 PM

    Top-notch feature,Brian. Congratulations, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 2:42:00 PM

    Yep! This fits in my memory very well...I think you've put wonderful motion into your stormy seashore. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 11:08:00 AM

    Brian another wonderful piece many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 8:45:00 AM

    I am so glad to see this poem again, another chance to capture the images of "white horses" on the tide! ~ Congratulations on this featured work! ~ Best regards, Carrie

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 9:26:00 PM

    Congrats Brian on your featured poem of the week on the Soup... excellent choice... luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 6:04:00 PM

    congrats Brian...I like this...JB

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 4:47:00 PM

    congrats on the featured poem, nicely penned.

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 1:57:00 PM

    Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Brian >> James

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 1:40:00 PM

    Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Brian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/21/2009 3:20:00 AM

    Brian, Congratulations, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I hope you are basking in the glory! You deserve it. Thanks for all you do to help us stretch as poets through your contests. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 9:46:00 AM

    Congratulations Brian on the honorable mention and also on the imagery evoked by your poem. I could see the wild waves on the shore. All the best, Krista

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 5:54:00 AM

    INCREDIBLE POWERFUL IMAGES THAT IMPLANT A POWERFUL MESSAGE IN THE MIND OF THE READER. CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS MASTERPIECE WIN, BRIAN. LAINIE

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 6:39:00 PM

    congratulations Brian

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 11:15:00 AM

    Congrats to you dearest Brian!!! xoxoxo

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 8:13:00 AM

    congrats brian on a notable win in this contest well deserved and well written such sad imagery tho keep up the great writing

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 2:02:00 PM

    beautiful poem, ongrats on the HM in the contest!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 11:31:00 AM

    Many congratulations in this 2009 contest Brian well done >> James

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 4:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on this well deserved Win, Brian, with this beautifully written piece! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 4:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Brian. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 10:30:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem, Brian. Great work, of course. Catch you up the trail ~<><

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 8:18:00 PM

    Well deserved. Imagery artistic. Congratulations on placing in the finals.

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:40:00 PM

    Congratulations my friend for winning poem in the finals!!! Very well deserved. I'm so very happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:05:00 PM

    Kuddos to you Brian!!! This wonderful poem, selected out of all the many many entries!!! How wonderful is that??? My heartiest congratulations to a fine poet, a great teacher and friend!! Well done!~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 5:31:00 PM

    Awesome images in this beautiful Lanterne, Brian. Congratulations on your double success and the best oif luck in the finals! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 3:17:00 PM

    Congratulations lbrian and thank you for your kind congrats to me. This is a lovely lanterne. I just got home to find all of my emails. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 12:12:00 AM

    Hi, Sir Brian Strand! Congratulation on your double first round win! Your entries are well-deserving. Good luck with the contest. Your poems are so inspiring and thought-provoking. Wishing you continued success. Warmest Regards, Andrew.

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