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Giving in

Just put me on hold while I do this,
Turn me off, 
I’ll be back when I’m done,
My reactions are no longer mine,
And if I pass 
Don’t worry,
Just think thoughts sublime.

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  1. Date: 1/23/2009 10:03:00 AM
    Message received. Emotion's strong. Nice beat. Good poem! ~Jen~

  1. Date: 1/23/2009 6:27:00 AM
    Steve - I loved the clear message delivered in this short format - God Bless, MJ