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  1. Date: 1/23/2009 1:47:00 PM
    Really, Dylan Thomas did this so much better. It is pointless trying to ape an established poet to the extent of plagerism. You might fool a few with the forcefulness but really in the end you are just fooling yourself.

  1. Date: 1/23/2009 9:39:00 AM
    True true, nice choice of words, for describe a hard emotion. Excellent work! Welcome to the soup! ~Jen~