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Volcanic Beauty

It’s cold and snowy,
The volcano is asleep;
The mountain is big.

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  1. Date: 2/19/2009 2:12:00 PM

    I wonder what will happen when the volcanoe erupts? great write!

  1. Date: 2/8/2009 2:50:00 PM

    Good haiku Danielle. Volcanoes and the weather can be nice. But I would be careful when it comes to volcanoes they can be very dangerous. Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/2/2009 5:09:00 PM

    Great haiku Danielle, volcanos can be beautiful and yet very dangerous..................very nice

  1. Date: 1/22/2009 7:01:00 AM

    This is in excellent form and provides wonderful clear imagery. Michael

  1. Date: 1/15/2009 7:38:00 PM

    I can relate to the cold and snowy with temps in North Dakota dipping to -30 without wind chill factor. Interesting perspective in this concise poem. I just found out that you have a few relatives here at the Soup. It must be fun to share with such a creative family. Keep on writing. I hope you find joy in your words. Karen

  1. Date: 1/15/2009 5:06:00 PM

    Great haiku Danielle, a volcano is dormant beauty...Raul